Friday, September 01, 2006

Between them

Slowly he tried to pull off her shirt. She hesitated. Suddenly she was very uncomfortable, she was scared. He sensed her unease. He let go of her shirt and held her close instead. He whispered in her ears, reassuring words, don’t worry, it’ll be fine. I’ll take care of you, I promise. With sensual ease he let his fingers find her shirt again. He slowly undid the strings holding it together and gently pulled it off. She shivered as her smooth brown skin lay naked now. He was whispering sweet words to her as his hands reached for her breasts. She saw the look in his eyes as his fingers touched her and she knew she had guessed right. It was there, a lump. She tried to smile.

8 comments:

:) said...

very very nice.i got goosebumps.

Anonymous said...

Beautiful, Neha!

- Sushma

Tabula Rasa said...

fantastic.

vivek said...

wah!

Neha said...

everybody: thank you!

confused said...

Great!

Loved the end. Left me surprised and its not something which happens often.

Neha said...

confused:
:) thanks a lot

Harjee Kapur said...

wow!