Monday, September 10, 2007

Sleepless nights

Anita hasn’t enjoyed a goodnight’s sleep for over a week now, and it’s beginning to show. The circles beneath her eyes are a dull black. And she is becoming as whiney as the baby. She hadn’t bargained for this. She knew babies were hard work, but she didn’t realize it would affect her so much. Anita is just 26. Her career is just about taking off, and a baby has no place in her life right now. And yet here he is. She has to admit, when he isn’t crying, he is a heartbreaker. There are times when he gurgles his little gooey smile at her and she just melts. But right now it’s a different story. She tries to ignore him sometimes, but he makes sure it’s not for long; sooner rather than later he forces her out of her slumber and demands some attention. At her wits end, she has even called her mother for some advice, but all she offered was, “darling, babies can get like that.” Right. She loves the boy to bits, but he is taking a toll on her. There is only one thing left to do now. She jumps off her bed; she calls her broker. “Hiten bhai - Bandra, one BHK, and no children, only old neighbours.”


5 comments:

burf said...

nice one but it would have been to hear the end if the baby would have been hers

Dusty Fog said...

nice twist in the tale...old neighbours though are a different kettle of fish...possibly frying pan to the fire...: )

Bit Hawk said...

Wow! This was an amazing story!!

Broom said...

nice twist! i like how you do that.

the anal idiot in me has to point out the typo though -
"And yet hear he is." should be "And yet heRE he is."

Neha said...

broom: thnk you, am very good at doing tht too :D, but all sorted out now ...